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Don't
Take Your Dreams to the Grave
Arthor: Jimmie Bratcher
Jimmie Bratcher’s new book
tackles the issue of discovering and following the individual dreams of
the heart. Using biblical stories and personal experiences, Jimmie’s
goal is to convince the reader that God has placed a singular dream within
your heart, and that there is no deeper sorrow than a life composed of
unfulfilled dreams.
Bratcher has already proven
himself to be a talented blues artist with a heartfelt gospel message,
and while the positive message from his music can be found in his book,
there are a few problems in Don’t Take Your Dreams to the Grave
that keep it from being of the same level of quality that can be found
in Jimmie’s music.
Bratcher’s influences are
very obvious for this book. I could sense early on that he was drawing
inspiration from John Eldredge’s Wild at Heart, and Bratcher openly
pulls an example from Eldredge’s book in chapter two. What made Wild
at Heart such a compelling read, in comparison, was its near constant
use of pop culture examples and biblical references to provide controversial
and provocative philosophical and spiritual conclusions on the nature of
mankind and God. You could flip to any page within Wild at Heart,
and chances are you’d find him quoting something, be it the Bible,
a renowned film, or a popular artist. Unfortunately, though Bratcher
similarly uses biblical stories to provide foundations for his main points,
he often settles into simple summarizing of biblical text that doesn’t
provide enough meat to his message. It doesn’t advance the point
he is trying to make, and may result in frustrating readers who have to
read through several pages of summary before finding Bratcher’s point.
Blanket, empty statements
are used to propel many of Bratcher’s main points—“Too often…," “More often
than not…," “What I mean is…,” “Don’t misunderstand me…,” “So often we….”
They shake our confidence in the author’s message and fail to convince
us that what the author is saying is truly profound and worth our consideration.
Many transitions between chapters are too apt, with Bratcher stating plainly
what’s coming next. It tugs too tightly on the flow between chapters,
leaving little room for the reader to naturally think upon and consider
the author’s statements in the chapter just read.
There are other choices
that have been made regarding the structure of the book that don’t feel
readily explained or complimentary to the text. A “Personal Dreams
Journal” is provided at the end of each chapter—am I supposed to write
my dreams on each one? What progress am I making if I do so?
Do I relate each entry to the chapter it is connected to? We’re never
told. This may be another influence from Wild at Heart, which
concluded with a blank chapter instructing the reader to write of their
own thoughts and discoveries while reading the book. But having an
entry for each chapter, as is the case in Don’t Take Your Dreams to
the Grave, feels forced—the reader isn’t provided with enough food-for-thought
yet to write his own entries in the earlier chapters of the book, and there’s
little incentive to keep the journal later on.
The book’s introduction
is nothing more than the first few pages of chapter one, though more cleanly
edited. On the more nitpicky side—once or twice within each chapter,
the author’s primary point is set off to the side of the page and printed
in giant text. Perhaps meant to catch the attention of casual readers
who are flipping through the book, but for those taking the time to read
each page, it’s diversionary and frustrating.
Bratcher’s book tends to
be most effective when he writes in a biographical form, sharing his personal
experiences. Unfortunately, he doesn’t do this enough. Don’t
Take Your Dreams to the Grave doesn’t measure up to the quality of
this artists’ musical work, but perhaps with more consideration and experience,
writing a great book may still be within Bratcher’s capability.
Jonathan Avants 12/03/05
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